The idea for my story
written by Alice
So I have an idea for a book I want to write and I want to know if people would like the plot so please message me if you like it or if you have some ideas on how I could modify the stories structure
Last Updated
05/31/21
Chapters
2
Reads
355
The main structure do not expect grate punctuation in this
Chapter 1
Ok the main character is Alice, the side main characters are: J.J Evern Emmaline and Luna (Quinni)
ok so this will be a little complicated to explain without the map but there are four main kingdoms, Mal(The main bad guys on the map they are in the top left corner) Duni (Basically the Canada of this world everyone is very nice there) Maho (The trading hub of the world a very rich kingdom where many business men live) and Hato (A mountainous kingdom where mystery lurks around every corner also where the main character is from) so the king of Mal is creating an army with kids who are in families that have the traits of the gods (Way back when gods still mingled with humans some families were blessed for doing deeds so old they have been lost to time, but these families are still around and still have these "Traits" J.J has a trait making his instincts in battle amazing) the king of Mal's soldiers burned and killed Alice's village and the people in it including her 7 year old brother forcing her to flee with J.J and Evern to an inn where they meet Emmaline who's parents made her leave their home in Duni for somewhere safer. They all decide that they either don't have anything left to live for (or in the case of Quinni had nothing better to do)
ok so this will be a little complicated to explain without the map but there are four main kingdoms, Mal(The main bad guys on the map they are in the top left corner) Duni (Basically the Canada of this world everyone is very nice there) Maho (The trading hub of the world a very rich kingdom where many business men live) and Hato (A mountainous kingdom where mystery lurks around every corner also where the main character is from) so the king of Mal is creating an army with kids who are in families that have the traits of the gods (Way back when gods still mingled with humans some families were blessed for doing deeds so old they have been lost to time, but these families are still around and still have these "Traits" J.J has a trait making his instincts in battle amazing) the king of Mal's soldiers burned and killed Alice's village and the people in it including her 7 year old brother forcing her to flee with J.J and Evern to an inn where they meet Emmaline who's parents made her leave their home in Duni for somewhere safer. They all decide that they either don't have anything left to live for (or in the case of Quinni had nothing better to do)
